Crit Feedback

Having had a peer crit where my work was analysed by different people, I am overall pleased with the feedback received. I received positive feedback for my writing and analysis of each theory and was told my explanations and reasoning behind each theory well well thought out and clearly justifies why id chosen each theory. I was told that to improve my writing further I could go into more detail about each theory I had chosen giving a more in depth explanation of each theory.

My book received positive comments on the layout and the overall aesthetic. There were a few people that struggled to understand how my layout worked and that I showed example of multiple theories across one image instead of one image or one set of images per theory as a few other people had done. These comments I agree with as if someone who knew nothing about colour theory looked at my book they would struggle to understand the layout if they hadn’t read the text on each theory first.

I plan to go away and take this constructive criticism into account, tweak the layout so its easier to follow and to give deeper analysis into my three theories.